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A shattered heart.
Showering down in reflective shards;
Lay trying to beat inside me.
A crystallized eye with a pearl in the corner,
Entranced wide open,
Staring as if hypnotized to what is ahead.
Cracking hands,
Dangling as if from the noose,
Frozen unclenched at my side.
Legs shuddering,
As if left bare on frigid tundra,
Search for a firm hold on the earth.

My person broken,
And my compassion tattered;
Shame on my naiveté.

It is fine by me.
I was a porcelain chess piece
And a king putting you into checkmate.

The  game is over;
You lost,
And in rage tossed me off the board.
You left me to lay fragmented on the ground.

No harm done.
The true pulse beats on like drums,
And the heart is yet to find its death.
In pieces on the floor I am.
I’ll just repair myself.
You aren’t my end.
Though I’m dented and hurt,
I can still feel mirth.
Just because I am shredded
Doesn’t mean I’m dead.

I am broken but alive.
©2008-2009 ~skenderbender
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This is the result of God-knows how many rejections. Finally I thought to myself screw it. I can't let it bring me down.

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:iconhalf-pint9930:
ben, this is awesome. lol.
no seriously

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:iconhopebaby:
wow you must have spent some time on this
its seriously good
:iconskenderbender:
wote it in school ^.^
I had just gotten rejected by a girl and I decided instead of becoming depressed I'd suck it up

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:iconhopebaby:
aww well thats a better way then sulking
ha ha
i like using my pics
and putting them on myspace
like a secret kinda way to show people what im feeling you know?
:iconskenderbender:
understood...seeing as you are a photographer/ model.
As a kind suggest though, you might want to try to focus on quality more than quantity. You've already put up more photos, so I'd suggest to space them out more so you don't wear out your inspirtion

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